New Character-Ledil

Character Name: ...... Ledil Botun .....
How You Heard About The RP Society: ...... I've seen RPSociety on Mabinogi, and I've role-played before elsewhere, so I wanted to try something fresh. I'm not trying to say this a small site, and i'm just trying it for fun, I just want to have a decent story because I haven't had on in a long time. .....
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? ...... 3 years, and, as I have said before, I haven't played in a while. .....
Is English Your First Language? ...... Yes. .....
A Short Biography Of Your Character: ...... When Ledil was little, he was a small village boy who wanted much more than a simple life feeding pigs and milking cows to live. One day he just got fed up with it all after being scolded for wanting more than his life, and just ran away from home. Ledil walked far into the woods until he got hungry. He tried turning back to his house, but soon he got lost. He got scared and started running, then he tripped, hit his head on a rock, and passed out. Then, Nao appeared and took him to a nearby house in the woods there was an old man, who's skill with a bow was unmatched. After Ledil woke up he met him, and soon thereafter became a student with the bow, but as soon as Ledil got the hang of things, bandits came and murdered his mentor. Ledil left his second home, and now travels with only his bow, and his teachings. .....
What type of character do you play? ...... Archer .....
What is your Mabinogi schedule?[ ...... Random .....

So, I guess he is a milliteans?

Seems appropriate since Nao is only seen by Milletians under normal circumstances. But yes for clarifications purposes please let us know

The Kaye approves this application.

Yes, he's Milletian.

Approved then

Only thing that confuses me is that he doesn't say that Nao takes him to Erinn...just to some random house in the woods. Can we assume al this happened -in- Erinn?

I'm confused by this as well. To make it clear, he should have died. It's the easiest way of getting to Erinn.

The way I read it he did die when his head smacked a rock and Nao descended. Of course a quick edit can clarify all of this. Or a response from the writer. Either way works

Nao doesn't take people to cabins, Kaye.

Can I re-write?

@Jabber True enough.

@Ledil Yes. Just for clarification purposes if could. Please and thank you.

A Short Biography Of Your Character (re-write): ...... When Ledil was little, he was a small village boy who wanted much more than a simple life feeding pigs and milking cows to live. One day he just got fed up with it all after being scolded for wanting more than his life, and just ran away from home. Ledil walked far into the woods until he got hungry. He tried turning back to his house, but soon he got lost. He got scared and started running, then he tripped, hit his head on a rock, and died being young and frail. Then, Nao appeared and took him to Erinn, a land where he wouldn't die so easily as hitting your head. After Ledil woke up he soon found himself on a strange road, and soon followed it. Ledil quickly found himself in a town called Tir Chonaill. An old man, who's name is lost to history, decided to take him under his wing as a student with the bow, but as soon as Ledil got the hang of things, bandits came and murdered his mentor. Ledil left, and now travels with only his bow, and his teachings. .....

Perfect, approved.

You get this!

-places an approval hat-

:3

The story makes a lot more sense. Look forward to seeing you around randomly.

Awesome. I'll be on tomorrow or so.

I count 4 approvals~ *moves*

I applied for the guild.