New Character Yuna

Character name:Yuna1
How You heard about RP society? From a freind (Akitan)
How long have you roleplaying?1-3 years
Is English your first language?Yes
A short biography of your character:As a young Girl Yuna1 was a orphan her parents died from a attack from Dark Knights so she been liveing with humans but one day she ran away from home and saw this villiage full of elfs she starts a new life with the elfs and one day she was walking through longa and was attacked by a White bear and got amnesia so she doesnt know anything from her past.
What type of Character are you?Range
What is your mabinogi schedule? i sometimes get on everyday unless i got alot of homework or internet failed

Umm...I'm sure you can't do that in one breath...could you add a coma or a period? Otherwise...I like it...besides the "1" in the name. We could always ignore that, like we did with my "22".

Definitely needs a little bit of editing there - punctuation, spelling, capitalization ... basic character concept is ok I guess.

Has anyone seen or been contacted by YUNA as yet?

Its been almost a week and I would prefer a little feedback on applicants before fast tracking them into the guild.
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seems to have evaporated ... closed unless yuna / yuma shows up again