Unseen's Application

Character Name: Unseen..
How You Heard About The RP Society: Ive seen some members around and been wanting to join for a while but never bothered applying
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? Around 2 or 3 years
Is English Your First Language? Yes it is
A Short Biography Of Your Character: Born and raised in vales...Unseen was known as an outcast and betrayer of all elves. One day on a visit to Filia, Unseen made her way to see Castanea in hopes to be welcomed to the village, she was taken away and thrown out by the guards. Shunned by her own people, Unseen swore revenge on the elves and Castanea. She later found out that Atrata was her mother..another elf betrayed by Castanea, This made her furious, she swore she would avenge her mother from the injustice she received and that's when she picked up her swords, bow and ice wand she had hidden away and began her training to assassinate Castanea. She trained in the art of deception, hiding and stalking in hopes she for revenge. Her hiding and stalking skills are what gave her the nickname "Unseen" given to her from her old lover who departed.
What type of character do you play? She started as an archer but found it she needed more power and picked up a sword and went melee, but still wasn't enough so she started learning magic.
What is your Mabinogi schedule?[ Random times though out the day

A little rough around the edges, although a good start overall.

I like the idea's behind the character's past and the reason they are driven. I approve! Hope to see you in game. Maybe we came scheme together!! **Said as Zeke**

Jack-of-all-trades in the skill department, eh? Like a majority of my characters. x3

I've always been a stickler about getting NPCs involved, especially as far as families go (i.e. was Atrata even supposed to have a daughter? Tarlach or Kristell? Various other couples that could never get their acts together?) but that's just me. While I'd highly suggest something a little more original as far as the family tree goes (because after all, Atrata isn't the only elf with a tragic history like this) everything else checks out fine. So I'll throw my approval in.

What is your Mabinogi schedule?[ Random times though out the day

High five to that! me too. ^-^ I like the Bio, seems to be like things could turn out very interesting indeed.

I approve -Dranis's stamp of approval- Still need another to go though. Not a mentor or a councilor So my approvals do not count

*chuckles* Don't lie, Dranis. You're certainly a 'member'. Just not a mentor.

No innuendos in that statement. Keep it moving. Nothing to see here. Keep it moving.

So two official approvals so far. Any others who wish to chime in?

Haha I so ment not a mentor But ya I'm cool

Well, I think the character idea is a nice start. It could certainly use a bit of cleaning up. Not being all that well knowledge'd in Elven history, I can't really comment on the NPC Relationship with the character, but it certainly does make it a bit more... Interesting. Overall, it gets my approval though. Also, don't all User characters come from the soul stream? Sooo, perhaps you can elaborate on that part.

(Unless the rules were changed in the three days I was gone, I'm sure all Users were/are required to come from the soul stream. >.>)

It was never required for RP purposes though it was a suggestion by some of the senior members of council.