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Post  Lynn17 Sun May 27, 2012 5:58 pm

IC Skill Name: Mana Stethoscope...
Power Class: Magical(?) Sensory(?)
OOC Representation: Role play.
Description: Diren focuses mana into his hand and places it on one's chest or back, allowing him to sense their heartbeat as if listening through a stethoscope, this allows him to even hear two heartbeats if a patient is pregnant.
Explain relation: He's a doctor, This would be a great help to him when he doesn't have his equipment.
Notes: It takes quite a bit of focusing and mana each time and even a bit of stamina due to focusing so hard, so if constantly used on so many patients, he'll become exhausted. Though it only works on Organic materials in close quarters.
Level: 2


((Thanks Jabbs. x.x;; -mebestupid-))


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Post  Auramune Sun May 27, 2012 6:05 pm


You don't need a power to feel a heartbeat of a person. You just stick your hand on them. So anyone could do that.
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Post  Teoxihuitl Sun May 27, 2012 6:06 pm

Yea, I do not see this as a power.
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Post  Lynn17 Sun May 27, 2012 6:08 pm

I derped when I posted it |: He's suppose to be able to sense their heartbeat and hear it as if listening through a stethoscope. x.x;

And I even't named it wrong. FAIL MOMENT Dx....-fixed it-
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Post  Auramune Sun May 27, 2012 7:28 pm


Well, stethoscopes only let a doctor hear/feel the vibrations of a heartbeat(well, whatever part of the body they are using it on. Chest, back, abdomen.) It only amplifies it. So it doesn't really do anything else. In emergency situations they don't even use stethoscopes. They check for a pulse at neck and wrists. With or without a stethoscope, he wouldn't automatically know what's going on to diagnose a patient, because that takes knowledge not equipment. Also, the body of a human may be different than a fomor. We don't know much about any of that.

I guess what I'm trying to say is the only difference between listening with someone's ear or feeling the pulse is the stethoscope mutes the rest of the sound around the doctor so they can only hear that. So the spell/skill wouldn't really be that effective. From what I can tell, anyways.
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Post  Lynn17 Sun May 27, 2012 7:47 pm

Well that's what i'm meaning, this skill helps him sense it better as if he's using a stethoscope...
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Post  Teoxihuitl Sun May 27, 2012 8:05 pm

I dont like the listening through the hands thing.
Seems like you could use it to hear through walls or other barriers.


Maybe instead of hear just feel the palpitations with your hands?


This power seems kind of redundant though, more power to you but a stethoscope would just do the same thing.
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Post  Glaceon Sun May 27, 2012 8:29 pm

I kinda agree with Teo here. I mean another idea for Diren that would avoid things like this is to carry goddess wings with him that warp him back to his Clinic on Belvast.

But yea, I mean I can kinda see where it only works on people, since really walls don't have heartbeats and stuff. Maybe that could be a limit, it only works on people?
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Post  Lynn17 Sun May 27, 2012 8:47 pm

Honestly, it would only work on people ._.
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Post  Xeek Sun May 27, 2012 9:06 pm

Lynn17 wrote:Honestly, it would only work on people ._.

I kind of skimmed through this, so bare with me if anything.

The thing is, you can't just give it a limit OOC, without one IC. IC-wise if it works like a stetama-scope(I know it spelled wrong), it would be able to hear vibrations to wall. Though, I don't think he'll be able to make out much more than putting your ear on it..
Honestly, I barely see this as a power xD Specially cause of what Aura and Teo are saying.

though, if you REALLY want it as a power. *shrugs*
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Post  Guest Sun May 27, 2012 10:23 pm

Vibrations doesn't necessarily mean you know what's going on on the other side of the wall.

I know..I used to use a stetho on my brother's door when I was little cuz he locked me out when I wanted to play Xbox.


That jerk.

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Post  Mari Eir Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:37 pm

It's not really a big deal what he can and cannot hear. He can just use a physical stethoscope if he wants to hear through a wall. But they don't have a source of mana, which is where this power fails. The power is just to look neat-o, from my understanding and is otherwise harmless.

And.. he can't exactly put his ear up to a person's chest. :I

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Post  Lynn17 Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:05 pm

Love that picture...even though its stick figures lol
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Post  Xenny Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:42 pm

Mari Eir wrote:
And.. he can't exactly put his ear up to a person's chest. :I

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Post  Guest Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:49 pm

Oh.

When you put it THAT way...yeah.

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Post  Lynn17 Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:43 pm

So do I have 1 or 2 approvals? o.o;
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Post  Xeek Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:45 pm

Lynn17 wrote:So do I have 1 or 2 approvals? o.o;

I count two.
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Post  Lynn17 Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:52 pm

yay 1 more +_+''
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Post  Vayne Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:14 pm

I don't see much point, but approved?
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Post  Guest Wed Jun 06, 2012 11:29 am

May not have a point to you, but eh. -shrug-

I'll move the thread.

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