New Member Request

Name: Lily11
Class: Strong Warrior
Biography: I was born in a temple in Erinn. I spent most of my time training with friends. Until one day I was walking and saw a bear. At first I was scared, but I thought about my prior training and attacked the bear. I won the long battle and started my real training. From that day forward I was fighting anything I saw. Now i'm a mighty warrior!!

Before giving a verdict or even posting an opinion I will suggest that you read over some of the other submissions.
Also take a look at the main post regarding what is needed in the way of information about you and your character.

A Valiant first stab though.

I agree with Captain, try looking at other applications to see what the format is.

For example: http://rpsociety.heavenforum.org/resolved-registrations-f14/new-member-t427.htm