Member Application - Lostx

Character Name: Darwin "Lost" Winston
How You Heard About The RP Society: Met a few members in Cor decided to hop on and they were really nice and they said I was pretty good at roleplaying :3
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying?: Hard to say maybe about 5 to 6 Years but it took me a bit to get my RP on track like no metagaming etc.
Is English Your First Language?: Yes English is my first language I barely know any other languages other then English.
A Short Biography Of Your Character:Darwin is a dark, creepy, and shady person, who came from another world that he barely even remembers but he does know that he isn't from Erinn and he plans on changing it for the better, he first came into this world meeting Nao a beautiful woman with White hair where he then crossed paths into Erinn as a young 16 year old with ambitions but when dark knights begin to appear he was accused of treason when he entered Tir na Nog by himself with the aid of Kristell and was banished to Iria and Belvast, in Iria making false stories that he was traveling as a merchant there, ever since he was banished from most of Uladh and now hes planning to find out why he was accused of treason as he didn't do anything wrong, as people called him a traitor when he was only a simple mercenary and treasure hunter, after he was banished Darwin took a grudge against all of Uladh and went by the alter Ego "Lost" as he now travels through Iria looking for secrets to get stronger and to return to Uladh and bring forth a new rule, but that goal seems impossible without aid of new friends..
What type of character do you play?: Mercenary(Warrior)
What is your Mabinogi schedule?: I go on most of the time when my Best friend is on but sometimes I go on and play alone so I'd say Atleast one hour a day,

Hi, welcome!

It doesn't say, but you need to specify if your character is a milletian or erinn-born. Do you have any more background history?

Milletians are immortal, but if they are killed in RP they don't respawn to Erinn for 3 RL days. Erinn-borns are mortals, and if they are killed in RP, they are dead forever.

Ah okay my Character is Milletian Sorry not for including that but nice rules

Even though you say he is a milletian I believe you should edit it into the bio, maybe explain his past life a bit also. Milletians usually come from other realms/worlds. Main reason for coming is death. They are then reborn into the soul stream guided by Nao.

Alright I'd add that to the bio.

The story itself is good (after the appropriate edits). Only issue is the entire story is like.. one sentence. While it doesn't exactly affect your chances of getting in, you should put some periods in there. O___X Other than that, I approve.

Punctuation is a good thing!

But still approved.

Approved

3 approvals did he ever apply at the guild stone?

I use to see him run around Tir with some of his friends, so he might have joined another guild or never applied. When I get the chance I will look for him in game unless someone else wants to beat me to it. :3

I'm one of the two that chatted with him during recruiting and got him added, so I'll look into it next time I see him online. Or just send a note. Or something. =x

Have not heard from him in months. Bluebinning.