new member Zaranko

name:Zaranko
how i heard: Maxinition
english first language:yes... grammer is bad though...

bio: Zaranko...its the only name that rings a bell... one day awoke next to a floating Crystal (moongate) and could not recall any memory... rembering the basic needs... (mostly food) got a tip to enter a dungeon to find riches (to buy mostly more food) it is there he found Max and Drax. together they helped him out and helped him rember most of his skills... but when he did somethings they couldent (like final hit and demigod) he feels something is off about him... also for a human...his hair is white and eyes red... now he is on a quest... to rember who...or what.. he is (probly gona go with Demon or fomar)

my char : Zaranko is a human

i play just about Everyday im not at work... my work times are all over the place...

I can vouch for this guy, as I'm the one who introduced him to the guild. After running Rundal with him, he's someone we don't wanna let pass by!

Although i don't think its my place to say, i think you should work on your bio a little more. Give a good look on who the character is and correct some of your grammar errors. Also, is an Errin-Born or a Millitean?In other words did he come to Errin via soul stream or was he born in Errin? And if he is a Millitean you should give some info on how he came to be in Errin.

Other than that, good luck on entering the guild

Don't worry, we'll help you work on grammar. Make sure the start of sentences have capital letters. The paragraph is a little sloppy, but there's defiantly potential in there. Just gotta clean it up a bit.

My only question right now is if he's a milletian. It seems like he is, but I'd rather you tell me than just assume. ^_^

I am sure your grammar will improve, I mean.. mine has. A lot.....Then again, it couldn't be worse than it was. I give my approval, but I still want to know if Erinn-born or Millitean.

*taps mic* check check, one two?

Anything?

I know the guy, he's been a bit inactive over the past few days, but when I see him, I'll tell him to respond.

I recently Rp'ed with this guy, he's pretty legit, and he knows a little more than the basics of Rping. I can vouch for this guy personally.

Met him, talked a bit. RP'd a bit.


Seems alright. I approve, if he still needs one.

He is a good RPer for someone that is new to it, but his bio could use some more work, you could explain more of before he lost his memories. But that is just my thought.

i use Mabinogi more then this web... guess i should talk more on here too.
I play often unless work gets overloaded ill try to talk more on this web too.
sorry about that

Hm, we'll need you to be more active on the forums, and answer the question asked

I think you need to work more on making your writing more fluid. Some of the bio looks like it's ideas just put together that don't really make sense. <--- Constructive Criticism... >_>

So... Is our question going to be answered?
I'm not going to approve without it, lol.

Unless I am in the wrong month, this is out of time.

Don't worry, you haven't time-traveled.

I come in war! *stomps flag*