New Member Applaction Yaway

Character Name: Yaway

How You Heard About The RP Society: I took a look at your guild stone and applied there

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? I am just beginning so I am sorry about my skills

Is English Your First Language? Yes but sometimes people dont understand what I am
talking about.

A Short Biography Of Your Character: Yaway was born into a poor family, having to give a his belong to the higher classes. One Night as he layed thinking a mysterious voice started to call out to him. The Voice told him that he could come aways from all of his misery all he had to do is to fall asleep. After his eyes were closed someone came slit his throat When he woke up he discovered that he was in the fairy tale land of mabinogi.

What type of character do you play? A dexterity craftsman

What is your Mabinogi schedule? random

Just a few minor grammar concerns, but nothing that can't be easily fixed. The back story seems to give enough to start with. There are just a few concerns...

1. Just from reading I am going to assume your character is Milletian yes? Meaning they were not born in Erinn.

2. This has to be the first time I have ever seen someone take this approach to coming to Erinn. Now I'm not saying it isn't possible, but there would most likely be limitations for such a case. Everyone who comes to Erinn passes through the soul stream, usually because they died, or were about to. I would like to hear a little more on this if you have anything planned. If not then we can assist you with alternate thoughts if needed.


Other then this I see no reasons not to offer my approval. But please if you could respond first and we'll go from there.

Well, I don't know if this is what he meant, he might mean that he died while in his sleep?

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Edit the bio to add this? Also make sure to specify he was sleeping, and not "laying down thinking." I can do the latter quite well awake.

The bio seems a bit short, it wouldn't hurt to add more about what happened as your character explored the new world.

Besides that I approve.

Any other news from this guy? It's been over 30 days.