Water Alchemist, Miraion! (New Character To have myself be re:added to the guild)

Character Name: Miraion Lhi' Porius

How You Heard About The RP Society: I've been here before >w>

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? I don't really know, maybe about six years now?

Is English Your First Language? Hai, hai,-sōdesu...

A Short Biography Of Your Character:

Miraion was born on a small Island in a village called "Aqua Town." The Village was named "Aqua" because the original founders of the village were all Water alchemist specialists. There were four in all. First was Barinal who was known for his great skills with the Alchemy skill of Ice, Frozen Blast. Nia, the second of the group was a master of crystal making and was the one in the group who normally was indoors making crystals for the others. The third member was named Sora and he was a specialist in crafting clouds, He normally served in the back line increasing the other's battle power by forming clouds. Finally the team's leader and master of all water alchemy, Kaima. Kaima was a powerful warrior as well as an amazing scientist. He was the first mayor of the small village and was also the first person murdered by the traitor Gihliha. Gihliha was a childhood friend of Kaima and then when it was Kaima chosen to be leader instead of himself, Gihliha grew jealous of Kaima, and then OUTRAGED by him then becoming a mayor of a village. As he grew more and more angry at Kaima eventually Ghiliha finally snapped and then assaulted Kaima. Kaima, unable to fully fight against his old friend died that day. Gihliha was never heard from or seen after that day...

Seventeen years later the son of Nia and Barinal has been trained to become a "Water Alchemy Master" as he so aspires to become like the great founder of his home. This is the short story of Miraion. Miraion, born seven years after the first Mayor's death is a young Alchemist who is training to become as strong as the first Mayor was before his death. Miraion aspires to become the best Water Alchemist ever and to raise two children when he becomes an adult. Miraion is a childish and foolish boy, but once he get's serious he can become a very focused warrior who is able to fight even if it means death may come from it. Miraion enjoys swimming and training his alchemy. His favorite thing to eat is ice made from spring water. He is always accompanied by his Snow Tiger Zeman (Pronounced Seh-mon). Miraion met Zeman as a small cub injured and alone. Miraion held off on his Water studies and learned the art of healing magic to help the small cub and in doing so gained his best friend. One day Miraion and Zeman were out on a run threw the other side of the island and were unaware of something horrible happening... Gihliha had returned! He had been gone training himself in the ways of the other Alchemy elements and after mastering all of them in such a short time he quickly destroyed the village and killed many of the villagers. All that was left were Miraion's parents and Sora. They tried as hard as they could but very quickly it was apparent that they were going to lose to this monster of a man. When he returned Miraion watched as the crazed Gihliha killed his parents and their family friend Sora. Angered by this he and Zeman attacked the man only to be quickly defeated by a single wind blast. As they both lay there weakened, Gihliha decided to take Miraion and use a hot piece of metal to carve the symbol of Alchemy on Miraion's back. "You shall live as the last survivor of that poor bastard's village boy, Tell the story of how i, the great master of Alchemy Gihliha completely destroyed this village and how i shall wonder on and do the same to what ever villages i feel like!" Exclaimed the man as he finished marking the boy. After hearing those words, Miraion passed out from the pain and slept. After awakening Miraion slowly stood up and looked around at all of the dead bodies of his friends and family. He knew he MUST kill Ghiliha to avenge the deaths of his people. Miraion took seven days burring the villagers. After doing this he got ontop of Zeman's back and road to the docks where he had prepared a boat for when he was ready to leave. He and Zeman took the small boat to a town called "Emain Macha" and from there he headed to a town of alchemy he heard of called "Taillteann" Since then this has been the boy's home and where he has been training to become a strong enough Water alchemist to take revenge for his village and kill Ghiliha.

What type of character do you play? Water Alchemist

What is your Mabinogi schedule? Every day i CAN be on, i AM ON.

Can we keep him, can we keep him!?

I love it. I love it -all-. I think it's wonderful that you're using Erinn's story and attempting to bring the 'populace' to life. It reminds me of Naruto in a way for some indistinct reason... perhaps because there -was- a 'Water Village' in the first ten episodes. I would just like to remind you to capitalize your 'I' when appropriate. Especially on an application. There's a lot of them that need it scattered amongst the text.

Perhaps you should announce who you were rather then saying you were here before.

well thank you. ^^

and i'm so used to using I in words so i'm used to ignoring the word I capitalization.

Galin wrote:Perhaps you should announce who you were rather then saying you were here before.

but that kills the secret ;P

Please do not attempt to keep secrets. We will find out. We find out everything.

I'll comment on the bio later on.

Honeko wrote:Please do not attempt to keep secrets. We will find out. We find out everything.

I'll comment on the bio later on.

I was kidding, i'm just Derez after all :/

Might want to also have your other open forum accounts cancelled seeing as you have at least 2 others still open.

Galin wrote:Might want to also have your other open forum accounts cancelled seeing as you have at least 2 others still open.

done o3o

Secondary and forgotten accounts closed.
Guild Stone application is in.
So all thats left is some reviews and approvals.

Personally I love the story. I like the way you're taking your own creativity and mixing it with the world of Erinn. This brings up the possibility that there is more to this world then we know. The Kaye approves of this application!

Judging by the Bio, Mirion is a Tuatha, correct. Because he was obviously born in Erinn.

This is well writ. Tuatha correct? Anyways, here's my approval.

If nobody else chimes in then I will - BRAVO on a well crafted story.

Now to process the guild stone application and set you free to hunt down the mentoring team

i have one thing to say... THIS WAS ALL IMPROVE!!!!!! XD