New character-Kairoka

Character Name: Kairoka

How You Heard About The RP Society: i have seen members of this RPsociety talking i thought you may be able to help me.

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? i dont "role play" i LIVE THE ROLE.

Is English Your First Language? Yes...im also fluent in the French language

A Short Biography Of Your Character: My name is Kairoka, i come from the dark world of Taizen. I was killed by the Dark Master, and i some how woke up in what you call "Alby dungeon". I walked around this peaceful world and overheard a conversation from members of this guild i thought "this may be my chance to get back, i must kill the Dark Master before he takes over my world....I MUST RECLAIM MY FATHER'S THRONE!"

What type of character do you play? I am a warrior prince
What is your Mabinogi schedule? im stuck here i have no choice to play....(weekends and after school)

Not Bad. Try to keep the puncuation up a bit on your application. It is an application after all, not that I can really speak for myself, I stilll have mistakes.

Other then that fact that I belive you should have a little more backround information on " your world " and this " Dark master " I belive it's good.

You have my thumbs up even though I am not a council member and my approvals don't count, You still got my attention.

Do change your forum name to match that of your character.

Honeko wrote:Do change your forum name to match that of your character.

Oh ....i am very sorry about that, accept my apology.

Everyone makes mistakes.
So as long as you clean up afterward and it doesn't leave a stain, nobody will mind one bit.

Seems pretty good to me.

Yes Dranis said, can you add a little more info on your background?
Everything else seems ok. *nodnod*

Dranis wrote:Not Bad. Try to keep the puncuation up a bit on your application. It is an application after all, not that I can really speak for myself, I stilll have mistakes.

Other then that fact that I belive you should have a little more backround information on " your world " and this " Dark master " I belive it's good.

You have my thumbs up even though I am not a council member and my approvals don't count, You still got my attention.

I do not want to reveal to much information to people....for i do not want untrustworthy people ruining my chances of my return...

Two more positive responses needed ......

Here's the second of three.

Captincrunch wrote:Two more positive responses needed ......

Thank you lord Captincrunch.....your help will be much appreciated.....

Kenelm wrote:Here's the second of three.

Much appreciated my liege....

I'm guessing the bio will be built on as you Role-play and people will learn about some of these major stuff, right?
If so, I approve.

Dellinger wrote:I'm guessing the bio will be built on as you Role-play and people will learn about some of these major stuff, right?
If so, I approve.

Again i do not want to reveal too much of my past as of yet..However i'm sure you will learn about me as time moves on.

I am sure we will.
Just be careful on how you set-up the scenarios for bringing things to light.
I say this from experience in that you can not depend to heavily on others to open the doors to your characters past.
Not only will they forget how to open a door, they will more than likely wander off chasing a dragonfly.

Nice nice. Note though, This isnt quite a "guild" in the rp. ANd the bio is about your charictar. Try to not mentain things like, I saw rpsociety group talking about a dragon and thought my charictar might like to join. No offense though.

Captincrunch wrote:I am sure we will.
Just be careful on how you set-up the scenarios for bringing things to light.
I say this from experience in that you can not depend to heavily on others to open the doors to your characters past.
Not only will they forget how to open a door, they will more than likely wander off chasing a dragonfly.

(I hear you loud and clear....been there done that)