new member Naoni :D

Character Name: naoni!warrior of the white rose!

How You Heard About The RP Society:friends telling me bout their guildies

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying?: wow, im really new at this whole role play thing and im willing to learn more about it!

Is English Your First Language? yes sadly ,i wanna learn the Korean language

A Short Biography Of Your Character: naoni, noble child of barnini and syreta(or something) .ended up runing away to a place far from her home land to bangor .there she trained in dungens and mining for ores to sell ingots. twas the only way for her to gain enough money to buy fish and bread for the many months it took to gain rank A refining . after completing her goal, she went to emain machna were she ran across a poor but young begger . she gave him a warm meal and a few bags of money to pay for his blessing . she trained all day and night to become a pally and protect her home land and many other foreign places . this was not the end of her troubles but the beginning .so she may live a long life protecting the places she was blessed to live in with her wonderful family . (end of preview)

What type of character do you play? a bit of a dare devil , very Righteous and reliable \

What is your Mabinogi schedule?[weekly if not daily . i play sun thru wed
i hope to become friends with u all

Not bad at all. *nods*
I feel like there can be just a wee bit of refining done with the bio,
however, it's enough to earn the Dellinger stamp.

Approved.

Only thing I need to ask the guild about again is...
Account name = Character name? Was that what was decided?
Little foggy atm.

I'll approve, but make one note:
[quote="rozekristal"many months it took to gain rank A refining[/quote]
Rank A refining is a game based description.
Alternatively, "many months it took to master refining on a basic level" would be a more in-character way of putting it

Hey there!

As Dellinger said, the bio does need a bit of refining. Lots of technical mistakes. But it's solid, and I can definitely see potential and promising creativity. I give my approval. Keep chugg'n away at that refining! You've only hit the half-way point! =)

Needs some polish, but we can work on that during mentoring.
Approved.

Two answer the questions posed to me and unvoiced as yet I shall now speak... er type ...

List Account Name = Applying Character Name ..... alt characters can come latter, switch out, etc
Everything that needs to be answered is in the Read Me First post, and if they are not then we will answer here and update the Read Me Post
Yup, game mechanics, ranks and such are not RP but a forgivable boo boo
As always good grammar is a keystone but if your grammar is weak then the mentors help you will have.

Lastly, I will be moving this thread now, once I confirm an application to process at the guild stone.