New Member-Mekillme

Character Name: Mekillme
How You Heard About The RP Society: Aydub my old gf that I still love
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? I do it with my friends a lot I would say 4 years
Is English Your First Language?Yes
A Short Biography Of Your Character: I am mekillme I found out about mabin when my gf and I were playing audition. I waited about 4 months for it to come out and I signed up for closed beta. I was accepted into closed beta and when I played i fell in love with the game. The character name I chose may be wierd but thats because I was so excited to play the name did not matter. I wanted to be first on mabinogi open beta and I started practicing since. My character like I said came from randomness, he is a icemage/ life skills expert, he got to mabinogi through a magical portal called login and create O.o. He loves to rp and play as a wolf or fox.
What type of character do you play? A potion making ice mage that is very greedy on money
What is your Mabinogi schedule? Mainly 5-7 hours a day depending on school work like 14 hours on saturdays
I already read guildlines O.o oh well

A little confusing to read through, but everything's there all the same. I'd approve, but I think it'd be best to set you up with a mentor so you get a better understanding of things and can get into the community a bit easier. I nominate Ay if she's up for it herself.

P.S. - Also, as this goes, you need three mentor/council approvals before being officially accepted. Good luck. :3

This is incorrect for so many reasons.
I disapprove.

... Oh lord... The sentence structure...
And I feel that the bio... I'm not going to say what I think about the bio.

Zachary Dellinger does not approve.
Please fix this application.

My thoughts on this application arn't important but I disaprove as well.

Don't just say you disaprove, tell him what's wrong with it!~

Anyway, it's nice but you need to write the bio about your character not your experiences in Mabinogi. We take the perspective from Errin (Mabinogi) don't sweat it much just change it please!~

Thanks,
-Omni your neighborhood fire mage.

Hmm...am I just too lenient?

Dellinger wrote:... Oh lord... The sentence structure...
And I feel that the bio... I'm not going to say what I think about the bio.

Omnisaga wrote:Don't just say you disaprove, tell him what's wrong with it!

Reasons for Disapproval:
1.Sentence structure wasn't very good.

2.The biography isn't about your character. You basically wrote how you made your 'character' in the game. The bio is supposed to represent the person, not you. Individuals that enter Mabi don't really:

[go] to mabinogi through a magical portal called login and create O.o. He loves to rp and play as a wolf or fox.

The roleplaying aspect of our guild is by actually roleplaying characters that came from some other type of world or are native to the world. It's not like .hack//sign.

3.You stated what type of character you played, but didn't support it at all via the biography. Rewrite the biography to actually fit a

potion making ice mage that is very greedy on money.

Please keep mind of the sentence structure, however.

Fix all of that, and you will possibly earn my approval.
The building blocks have to be there before I can honestly suggest even mentoring.

Omni: This is why I don't actually spell out my reasons for approving or disapproving.
Because if I spell it out, I'll look like an (other word for donkey)

X3 I think Omni's comment was for Yam not Dell :3

I think Omni's comment was for everyone who doesn't use specifics...

Psst! Don't tell Omni i said that...

Omnisagi wrote:I think Omni's comment was for everyone who doesn't use specifics...

Psst! Don't tell Omni i said that...

*thwack* Do you approve or disapprove? XD

Well, I do sense some enthusiasm and I really don't want to squish that.
Enthusiasm is good but the better things in life do not come easy, so please do not take the criticisms to hashly but as firm pointers on how to better your next attempt.

As Guild Master *waves hi* I don't reject anyone on the first try but I also don't accept applications that don't have any merit.
I do ask that applicants do try. You can review the closed application thread to see both accepted and eventually rejected applications
If you mess up on the first try, then just post an updated application / biography.
It does not have to be perfect but putting forth the effort and showing a willingness to learn while having fun will win me and everyone over just as fast as a masterly crafted biography.

Character Name: mekillme
How You Heard About The RP Society: Aydub/friends
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? Good amount of time
Is English Your First Language? Yes
A Short Biography Of Your Character: Born by the grace of nao, I was there under the tree hiding from the fomors at only age six. My parents fighting to protect me. My parents are forced to flee leaving me alone. As the fomors saw me they charged. When they got close anough to kill me they all froze by a blast from a arrow. A Falcon comes and kill all of them. He then goes back into elf form and brings me to a village. I then learn to hold a bow and shoot arrows. When I reached 10 I got my first long leather bow. It was passed down by my ancestors but horrible durribility. I decided to trade it in for a new long leather bow but when I showed the elf he was mad at me. I was shunned out of village. The elf sent me to quill base camp where I spent the next year. I woke up one morning and saw a boat and heard of a place far away from here. I stow away on the boat and get to Bangor. I then meet a travling merchant named price who told me of paladins. He sent me to Dunbarton where I found Stewart. I learned the ways of a mage and how to cast thunder. Durring the day time I would spend my time with Aeira. She always let me read the books for free ,and I loved it. I learned close hand combat from Aranwen ,and cooking from Glenis. When I got to be 21 years old my mentor ,Stewart, thought I was ready to go on my own. He gave me a thunder wand and sent me out. I was looking for a place to call home. One day I was running after a spider ,and the spider led me to a rock. I looked at the rock ,and this rock was a guild stone. The guild stone said Rpsociety and thus I come to you. Hoping to find a home where I can hone my skills and have fun doing it.
What type of character do you play? Well rounded thunder mage
What is your Mabinogi schedule? 5-7 hours on weekdays (except busy homework days) 12 hours on weekend probly
Now is this better

I'd still say grammar could be better,
but I think we could work with this.

Approval with a motion for mentorship.

I know I can't approve anything, but input he'll probably need a mentor.
But, it's better Meki.

Accepted with the condition that a mentor or two help this new soul adapt to the rigors of the society and good grammar.

Then all I have to do is wait for an actual application at the Guild Stone It pays to leave a good impression.

Mekillme... I think I know you... We used to be in the Elven guild together? O_o At least I think that's you. I remember you and Rhakark were going at it for a while