new member - swinginsword

Character Name: swinginsword
How You Heard About The RP Society:
R: I've seen the guild around a bit and I have a friend in this guild and I think I'de liek the guild a lot.

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying?
R: I've been Role playing with some friends, I do it when ever I can.

Is English Your First Language?
R: Yes, english is my first language but I am starting to learn a bit of Spanish.

A Short Biography Of Your Character:
R: My character is an outcast of the black knight's (though shes still transform's into one) for helping the Paladins but tends to be aggressive about her past.

What type of character do you play?
R: My character could be timid and a bit mysterious because she won't talk much.

What is your Mabinogi schedule?
R: I'm on when ever I can after school and I'm at home and on the weekends at home from school at around 3:00p.m. I'm not on for school around 7:00am Mon-Friday. but I'm willing to do role playing cause I love doing it.

hope i can join,
swinginsword

I would ask for a bit more thought put into the application.
I feel there are a couple of things in the app that need to be either changed, fixed, or expanded on.
And there are some minor spelling issues on top of that.

I hold my approval for a little bit.

Hung out with you for a little while, you have a good head on your shoulders, and things were fun. I kinda wonder about what your character's name would be or if it really is "Swinginsword", but at the same time I think that'd be fun to call somebody too. o.o;

Application looks good to me. Neater than most too. :X *shall be erasing this shortly before somebody eats his face*

What I'm trying to say is...I approve.

I see potential.
Buuuut...
I am withholding my approval until I can actually see how she RPs.

Needs more on the Bio section, too.

Could prove interesting if given a little help. Ask one of the mentors (red letter name people) to give you a hand if you need it with the background story.
I suggest, if you have the time and like a good laugh, that you browser some of the other applications and character Biographies.
Inspiration and all that.

Also, if you happen to use Firefox instead of that other browser, it has the option of adding spell check to your online typing. ( I use it all the time - doesn't help with grammar though)

Now back to getting my Gaming PC and Mabi to play nice together

I would like a tad longer bio, and...that's about it.

I'd say yes, but I haven't RPed with you yet so I'm withholding on that.

Never bothered to come back and respond to this thread
They did contact me privately to complain about not being accepted right away and have gone with another guild

Application closed until they get serious about RP and change their mind.