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Post  Rosesrain Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:03 pm

Character Name: Rosesrain

How You Heard About The RP Society: Two buddies are in here. x3 So I blame them if I do this wrong. XD

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? x3 four years? XD Maybe five

Is English Your First Language? Yep :3

A Short Biography Of Your Character:

Rose dosen't remember anything from the point she washed up on a random beach and wandered around for a couple days. She didn't know anything, not how to speak and she still dosen't know how to read. Two people found her and helped her learn how to talk and they helped her learn how to take care of herself. She randomly left one day after getting into a bad fight with them and ran off she never go to see them again. So she started traveling on her own since then.

What type of character you play? Ranged

What is your Mabinogi schedule?: When I get bored... so..... about..... every second I can. XD


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Post  Xeek Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:31 pm

Hmmm seems a little plain to me ^^l. If you can open a bit more? None of us bite... well most of us don't anyways o_o
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Post  Dalvar Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:38 pm

Needs more.

I'll need someone to vouch for her RPing ability before I okay her.
Until then... "Mentor Necessary".
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Post  Eranor Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:54 am

I bite Smile

Ive seen her RP though, and it is excellent, but I beleive with a little help she can formulate her story in an interesting direction.

I say yes.
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Post  Xeek Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:47 pm

If A-can thinks she can by me she is allowed but I will be keeping a close eye Razz Wink Cool
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Post  Captincrunch Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:04 pm

A good start though the Biography needs a bit more .... well ..... it needs a bit more of a story.

Have a read of some of the Biographies from the main thread on alternative characters OR some of the accepted past applications.
You might be inspired to write something "interesting" study

I really would like to learn a bit more scratch
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Post  Angron Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:34 am

Okay, as a forum roleplayer I will say that your history is rather a bit tad short. It'd be nice to know why and how she ended up at the beach, and how she couldn't speak, and couldn't remember anything. Go more indeph into her character, explain how and why she got into the fight with the two men that saved her. Did they fight verbally or physically? We don't know that except you, so show us more about her character. After you get accepted, I'd be more than happy to take you under my wing.

Like Dalvar I stamp: 'MENTOR NEEDED'.

Edit: Remember, the important rule of writing a history of a character is not to make it monotone. You're writing their past experiences so make sure you go more indeph, if you've roleplayed that much then you should obviously be able to do it. I expect more from someone who's been roleplaying that long.
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Post  Captincrunch Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:27 pm

Since no major objections as yet and people are willing to mentor - Approved pending probationary mentoring period study
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