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Post  Raxsus Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:30 pm

Character Name: Raxsus Wolf (Rax)
How You Heard About The RP Society:Saw the GuildStone.
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? Dabbled with it for a few years.
Is English Your First Language? Yep, English is my first language.

A Short Biography Of Your Character: Rax is a very calm, caring protective 16 year old kid. Ever since his parents died, he has been extremely protective over his younger sister, Lunareiko. One stormy night, Rax and his sister were walking through the woods to their camp at a near by river. They were nearly there when he heard something coming from behind them...he looked back and saw a massive bear lurching towards them with the intent to hunt in its eyes. As the bear starts running for his sister, he throws his torch at the bear, barely making it flinch. The bear the swings his massive paw at Rax, throwing him into the forest, all went dark after.


He awakes to see his sister sleeping soundly next to him, and a strange feeling that something was missing from his memory...He then after noticed he had a niche for alcehmy. He put the niche to good use and pursued the path of Battle Alchemy
He opened his eyes to find himself im the presence of a girl wearing a black kimono, with long white hair and deep blue eyes. The girl looks at him and says "We are still a long way from going to Erinn." and blacks out yet again.

After finding out his parents never made it to Erinn, and the dissaperance of his sister, he secluded himself from all and anything.
He returned looking different, and with a different outlook on things. Though he still suffers hallucinations including his sister and parents, they will be quelled if not payed attention, or when he is lulled to sleep.
He tends to become more violent than usual if either one of these are brought up.
(Best way I can think of to describe this is like the emotional turmoil that of Tomoya from Clannad goes through. Yes, the feels.)

His knowledge of Alchemy improved, and gained the ability to use basic magics.
He managed to strengthen his body and mind, aswell as grew his hair out.

He let go of his lost lover from his own world, fell in love and married Lightningnat.

What type of character do you play?: OOC: Battle Alchemist IC:Calm, caring, incredibly protective.
What is your Mabinogi schedule?: Im on pretty much everyday.



Last edited by Raxsus on Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:51 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Did title wrong lolz. Fixed story.////// Editing due to things that will be IC.)
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Post  Glaceon Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:38 pm

The story is nice, but sadly we don't just awaken with newfound knowledge about things. You gotta learn it first. However, you could say that as soon as he got to Erinn, he pursued battle alchemy.
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Post  Raxsus Sun Jan 06, 2013 12:07 am

Glaceon wrote:The story is nice, but sadly we don't just awaken with newfound knowledge about things. You gotta learn it first. However, you could say that as soon as he got to Erinn, he pursued battle alchemy.

I see what you mean. I took that part out and revised it.
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Post  Dalvar Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:52 am

Yeah, this looks good.
I approve.
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Post  Soifa Sun Jan 06, 2013 12:58 pm

Approved.
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Post  Teoxihuitl Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:50 pm

Approved.
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Post  Dellinger Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:51 pm

Overapproval, since I add one along with my instructions.

Go search out the guildstone! Apply. When you're admitted to the guild, someone give us the heads up and this shall be moved.

Release the hounds, my friends!
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Post  Auramune Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:59 pm

Added to the guild
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Post  Raxsus Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:29 pm

I've edited to story some. Look at it if you wish.
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