New Member - Yasaishiku

Character Name: Yasaishiku Tohno
How You Heard About The RP Society:I passed the guild stone when I first started, and then was told how to use melee by someone who roleplayed.
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying?: I have been roleplaying for a total of one month as of 6/17/2012.
Is English Your First Language?: English is my first language.
A Short Biography Of Your Character:My character's name is Yasaishiku Tohno, a boy who was raised in rural japan as the son of a Japanese family. Yasaishiku's family was killed by a rampaging samurai who was mad at how outdated samurai were now considered. He has currant red hair and red eyes, a result of the style of Kendo he studied to take revenge on the rampaging samurai Hotaru. He decided to keep this in Erinn when he was reborn. Recently Hotaru, who died of old age was reborn in the Soul Stream unbeknownst to Yasaishiku.

Yasaishiku, not willing to let Hotaru escape, even in death, committed Seppuku. He was then reborn in the soul stream. Also, Yasaishiku has a pronounced accent, uttering the word Oro (Usually long and drawn out) when suprised or confused. He also tends to follow a sentence with a reaffirmation. A few examples are as follows "You will unhand Nao, you will", "Give up, you should." "Put down your sword, put it down". Also, Yasaishikus Kendo style is Razen-Ryu style (Literally Wind Dragon style.)
What kind of character do you play?: I play a melee character who uses 2 1-handed weapons. I prefer to use Wakizashis and use Japanese type clothing. However, since these are not readily available at most times I usually use common substitutes such as Wooden Swords for their similar shape.

I am usually on every day but the time is random.
I am sorry that my description is so long but I could not find a way to reduce it without losing my "feeling".
I used to play in g12, but I haven"t in a while so my character is new. (Locked out of my old account)

It's actually of decent length in regards to what's looked for on this forum.

A complete character introduction will have more defined paragraphs, and have plenty of detail words.

*edit* I would advise breaking what you have under the biography section into paragraphs so it's a little easier to read.

Alright, I have made the changes now.
Also, once my application is accepted, its name is changed and then I am accepted ingame, correct? And then after ingame i have to be mentored through 3 rps and 3 dungeons?

Yasaishiku wrote:Alright, I have made the changes now.
Also, once my application is accepted, its name is changed and then I am accepted ingame, correct? And then after ingame i have to be mentored through 3 rps and 3 dungeons?

It won't be re-named, they will simply moved it to the approved section. And yes.
Once you have three approvals in your applications, you will be accepted, and so on.

Also: Keep in mind, Nao may not be used in any personal plots. While your character may know Nao, Nao herself can not be used for plot progression.

Ok, I have further edited my story.

Also, something to note is before dying, we generally have no knowledge of soul stream. And people don't simply find a "way into soul stream." The only way to get there is via death as it's not something just anyone can get into. I'm mainly looking at the first paragraph and the edited second paragraph start. Those are just a few issues I can see with the plot and bio you have.

Also, as a Milletian, the scars on the body don't stay when rebirthing. So once your char rebirths, his appearence could possible change and the scar on his face would vanish until placed on there again.

How is it now?

I see no more conflicting issues, good to go. Now you gotta wait for some colored people to come in and offer the three approvals.

Success!!!!!

Perfect on my watch. While Glacia is right about scars not transferring through rebirth, you may request in the power section for the scar to be bound to your character's soul, if they were obtained in a way that the scar is "part" of your character, like a traumatic event.

Or he could just make them every time he rebirths.. >_< Scars are a total fashion statement!

Yo lo puedo approvar.

I edited my characters weapon style. That was all that changed. Now he uses double wakizashis or wooden swords or Tanto Wakizashi pairs etc.

Teoxihuitl wrote:Yo lo puedo approvar.

Teo can approve it -nods-

Approved.

Approved. And is your name supposed to be a take on "yasashiku"? o__o

Its the name of one of my relatives who lives in japan. xDDDDDD So it might be.