My (editedbreifly) registration

Character Name:Hakusojun
How You Heard About The RP Society: I was in Quilla base camp being a noob and all and saw a group of members who turned me to it
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? About 2 years
Is English Your First Language? Yeah, sure is
A Short Biography Of Your Character: My character is a warrior who is airheaded and random at times but when it comes to battle a strong ally.On my free time i usually walk around getting myself killed and all.Currently on the G9 quest arc(Don't call me a noob I just started Mabi a few weeks ago and i've been grounded a week of it)Strong suited and his lifelong goal is to own a Claymore!!! thats about it anything else just ask.
What type of character do you play? Warrior/Mage(or Warmage).
What is your Mabinogi schedule? Random
Gender: Male

First off I just want to point that this is a nice start for a bio. It's a little short, but nothing you can't build on as you rp. The only issues I see, mind you the first isn't so much an issue as it is a sort of formality. Normally we ask for your thread topic to just be New member or Application and your character's name. But nothing that can't be fixed xD. Second of all in the field for "What type of character do you play?" we're looking for a few words that describe how your character acts and fights. Looking at your bio it would appear your character is a warrior? So just build on what kind of warrior he is. Nothing lengthy, just a few words is all. But aside from these I see little problem with giving my approval to you.

I said what, what?

In the... What?


All jokes aside, let me second what Kayeo has mentioned, and add onto it. When fleshing out your biography, try to ask yourself these questions and incorporate the answers to add a little depth, and help us understand where you're coming from. Is he a soul streamer? If not, what are some notable experiences in his/her life? If yes, then what did he/she ((sorry, you never clarified what gender your character is!)) do in his/her past life? How did your character's arrival to Erinn take place?

Both of your reviews were what i was looking for The last Rp guild i was in did not even ask questions I will fix this info and thanks for the helpful critiscism

As someone who frequently checks the forums (especially new applications) I couldn't help but notice your mention of G9. I'm a Royal Alchemist and though there is only one RA assistable quest in G9, I can still help out

And uh.. is this character Erinn Born or a Soul Streamer? o_o

I can help out as much as I can in G9. G10 and G11 are different matters as I won't become a RA for a while. I also check the forums a lot and I love seeing new people.

...So.. you have 1 of 3 approvals (Only players with Blue, Pink, or Red names can approve... and actually count).

Just to make sure, (And I think we really should warn new applicants more often of this, cause some don't like reading long text pages.), please read the rules of conduct and mentoring in the guild, if you haven't already.
Mentoring is easy and is actually just a way for us to make sure that we know you know the basics of Roleplay, as it appears we have had players that join that don't know much on it. (Heck, I think I was one... but I'm fine!!!)

Erinn-born: Think Real life. One chance to live. You die... die for good (Create a new version of your character if this happens most likely.). By dying... I mean a PC character actually going up and chopping your head off, not the dungeon fomors KOing you.

Soul-streamer (Millitean): Think Video-games with the infinite lives cheat code. You die, you can come back... again and again.

I look forward to seeing you join and playing with ya!

Yes a little fleshing and spelling things out. By reading you very short biography I figured that your character is a Miletian (soulstreamer) since no normal person would say that they go out to get killed on a regular basis like going to the corner store. Then again I don't think anyone in this motley group would be considered Normal. ^_~

PS, I think this person is Male since they did say that "his lifelong goal is to own a Claymore"

PPS - Add a second approval - any rough edges can be polished during the mentoring

Wouldnt that be 3 approvals the first persons name was in blue

Nope. Approvals are required from colored names ^_^

But I'll give you the 3rd approval. ^_^

Someone wins a candy!

Is it me? <.<

I'll see if I can let you. Mentoring begins now.

Make sure you apply to the guild stone if you haven't yet. ^_^

Soo what mentor are on mabi right now

The Guild Stone is in Tir just by the gateway out, near where the white wolves run around.

Hakusojun wrote:Soo what mentor are on mabi right now

Don't worry too much. There's almost always at least one mentor on. Just ask around a bit and see if they can help.