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Post  Paulpaul Wed May 19, 2010 10:25 pm

Character Name: Paulpaul

How You Heard About The RP Society: Saw someone with the guild tag.

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? : For like three or four years.

Is English Your First Language? : Yes it is.

A Short Biography Of Your Character :I dont really know what to put so....Here it goes.

Paulpaul was on a quest from his father to get rid of some bears pestering the crops. He never returned. He was awoken by a strange dog named Pamiiruq, who later became his loyal companion, who was carrying a sack with two gladiuss Gladii. It is unknown how he got to Mabinogi Errinn. The origin of his past is unknown for he has lost his memory upon entering Mabingoi Errinn. It has been 3 years since that life changing day. Now Paul and Pamiiruq have grown stronger. Paul is on his way to becoming a Knight of Light, But with great power comes great responsibility.

What type of character do you play? :I play a warrior trying to be come the strongest and wisest he can be.

What is your Mabinogi schedule? : Almost everyday from 4 to around 10, Sometimes 11 Pm central time.


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Post  Kenelm Thu May 20, 2010 8:56 am

This is a good start. I have a few pointers to help you along:

  • The game is Mabinogi; the in-game world is "Erinn."
  • Keep an eye on your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. (I'm sure you intended to use "sack" instead of therm used in reference to anatomy. I also see an extra "s" at the end of "gladius.") Plural is Gladii
  • Many of us would like to know more, as this is a biography. Character biographies (introductions) usually provide a fair amount of background information, some of which the characters themselves may never learn.
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Post  Paulpaul Thu May 20, 2010 8:37 pm

Okay. Yeah i added an extra "s" because i wasn't sure if that was a plural of it or not. Yea i forgot a "k" at the end i was kinda in a hurry because i had to get off the computer.
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Post  Captincrunch Thu May 20, 2010 9:58 pm

No worries since you can add extra posts to this thread with more detail as you create it.
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Post  Jaeden Fri May 21, 2010 6:01 am

Paulpaul wrote:Okay. Yeah i added an extra "s" because i wasn't sure if that was a plural of it or not. Yea i forgot a "k" at the end i was kinda in a hurry because i had to get off the computer.

*Gets out the thwacking broom*

Capitalize those I's! Or else Lexie will . . . well. She's a free woman now, so there's no telling what she'll do.

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Just two things!

1.) You don't have to be called Paulpaul =) His name can just simply be 'Paul'.

2.) I'm going to go ahead and say what most people will probably think already so we can address the issue now: That's an awfully vague history! Yes, it's a great starting point, but it'd be terribly awkward to see a random dog carrying around two glads for no reason. I don't know if the mentors will try to require more from you or not, but just remember that there is an edit button (as Capt has so kindly already mentioned). Should you come up with more history for your character - and I recommend that you do, because history is what helps a character develop their personality, please don't be shy to add on to what you already have. In fact, I encourage you to.

And with that, *GLOMPS* Don't be a stranger!
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Post  Xenny Fri May 21, 2010 7:49 pm

Carp! It's the broom!

Run!
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Post  Dellinger Sat May 22, 2010 5:32 pm

Creepy wrote:Carp! It's the broom!

Run!
Who's Carp?
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Post  Higura Sat May 22, 2010 8:24 pm

I'm assuming its a reference to Dwarf Fortress, considering Carp used to be the most vile of creatures. They could completely destroy whole civilizations. >_>
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Post  Xeek Sat May 22, 2010 9:01 pm

Dellinger wrote:
Creepy wrote:Carp! It's the broom!

Run!
Who's Carp?


There is a theory that a humans can identify words if completely rearranged except the first and last letter. You figure out the rest XP




Also, the new post looks WAY better :3 As for the Bio, it will come in time. Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
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Post  Dellinger Sat May 22, 2010 9:55 pm

How about this.
I'll give my approval, and ask you to seriously take in what our mentors have to say.
Sound good, Paulpaul?
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Post  Paulpaul Sun May 23, 2010 12:26 am

Okay. Thanks.
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Post  Higura Sun May 23, 2010 3:33 am

I'll give my approval. But I think you'll need mentoring. You seem like you've got a lot of potential and can become a great roleplayer. :3
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Post  Xeek Sun May 23, 2010 6:53 am

That's 3 *nods*
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Post  Captincrunch Sun May 23, 2010 8:00 pm

Okely Dokely - will process this once I am in Guild Master Mode. Wink
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