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New Member - Paulpaul
Character Name: Paulpaul
How You Heard About The RP Society: Saw someone with the guild tag.
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? : For like three or four years.
Is English Your First Language? : Yes it is.
A Short Biography Of Your Character :I dont really know what to put so....Here it goes.
Paulpaul was on a quest from his father to get rid of some bears pestering the crops. He never returned. He was awoken by a strange dog named Pamiiruq, who later became his loyal companion, who was carrying a sack with twogladiuss Gladii. It is unknown how he got to Mabinogi Errinn. The origin of his past is unknown for he has lost his memory upon entering Mabingoi Errinn. It has been 3 years since that life changing day. Now Paul and Pamiiruq have grown stronger. Paul is on his way to becoming a Knight of Light, But with great power comes great responsibility.
What type of character do you play? :I play a warrior trying to be come the strongest and wisest he can be.
What is your Mabinogi schedule? : Almost everyday from 4 to around 10, Sometimes 11 Pm central time.
How You Heard About The RP Society: Saw someone with the guild tag.
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? : For like three or four years.
Is English Your First Language? : Yes it is.
A Short Biography Of Your Character :I dont really know what to put so....Here it goes.
Paulpaul was on a quest from his father to get rid of some bears pestering the crops. He never returned. He was awoken by a strange dog named Pamiiruq, who later became his loyal companion, who was carrying a sack with two
What type of character do you play? :I play a warrior trying to be come the strongest and wisest he can be.
What is your Mabinogi schedule? : Almost everyday from 4 to around 10, Sometimes 11 Pm central time.
Last edited by Paulpaul on Sun May 23, 2010 2:18 am; edited 1 time in total
Paulpaul- RPS Recruit
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Join date : 2010-05-19
Age : 28
Location : Dubuque, IA
Re: New Member - Paulpaul
This is a good start. I have a few pointers to help you along:
- The game is Mabinogi; the in-game world is "Erinn."
- Keep an eye on your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. (I'm sure you intended to use "sack" instead of therm used in reference to anatomy. I also see an extra "s" at the end of "gladius.") Plural is Gladii
- Many of us would like to know more, as this is a biography. Character biographies (introductions) usually provide a fair amount of background information, some of which the characters themselves may never learn.
Kenelm- Mentor
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
Okay. Yeah i added an extra "s" because i wasn't sure if that was a plural of it or not. Yea i forgot a "k" at the end i was kinda in a hurry because i had to get off the computer.
Paulpaul- RPS Recruit
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Location : Dubuque, IA
Re: New Member - Paulpaul
No worries since you can add extra posts to this thread with more detail as you create it.
Captincrunch- Dragon
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
Paulpaul wrote:Okay. Yeah i added an extra "s" because i wasn't sure if that was a plural of it or not. Yea i forgot a "k" at the end i was kinda in a hurry because i had to get off the computer.
*Gets out the thwacking broom*
Capitalize those I's! Or else Lexie will . . . well. She's a free woman now, so there's no telling what she'll do.
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Just two things!
1.) You don't have to be called Paulpaul =) His name can just simply be 'Paul'.
2.) I'm going to go ahead and say what most people will probably think already so we can address the issue now: That's an awfully vague history! Yes, it's a great starting point, but it'd be terribly awkward to see a random dog carrying around two glads for no reason. I don't know if the mentors will try to require more from you or not, but just remember that there is an edit button (as Capt has so kindly already mentioned). Should you come up with more history for your character - and I recommend that you do, because history is what helps a character develop their personality, please don't be shy to add on to what you already have. In fact, I encourage you to.
And with that, *GLOMPS* Don't be a stranger!
Jaeden- Rock Kandy Mountain Golem
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
Carp! It's the broom!
Run!
Run!
Xenny- Kosher Dill Troll
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
Who's Carp?Creepy wrote:Carp! It's the broom!
Run!
Dellinger- Dragon
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
I'm assuming its a reference to Dwarf Fortress, considering Carp used to be the most vile of creatures. They could completely destroy whole civilizations. >_>
Higura- Kosher Dill Troll
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
Dellinger wrote:Who's Carp?Creepy wrote:Carp! It's the broom!
Run!
There is a theory that a humans can identify words if completely rearranged except the first and last letter. You figure out the rest XP
Also, the new post looks WAY better :3 As for the Bio, it will come in time.
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Xeek- Retired
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
How about this.
I'll give my approval, and ask you to seriously take in what our mentors have to say.
Sound good, Paulpaul?
I'll give my approval, and ask you to seriously take in what our mentors have to say.
Sound good, Paulpaul?
Dellinger- Dragon
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
Okay. Thanks.
Paulpaul- RPS Recruit
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Location : Dubuque, IA
Re: New Member - Paulpaul
I'll give my approval. But I think you'll need mentoring. You seem like you've got a lot of potential and can become a great roleplayer. :3
Higura- Kosher Dill Troll
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Re: New Member - Paulpaul
Okely Dokely - will process this once I am in Guild Master Mode. ![Wink](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_wink.gif)
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Captincrunch- Dragon
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