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Post  Shaye-La Sun May 09, 2010 11:41 am

Character Name: Shayelyn

How You Heard About The RP Society: Ive heard of it for awhile but i never really thought i'd join until now.

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? 3-4 years

Is English Your First Language? Yes

A Short Biography Of Your Character: She was born to a mother that could not take care of her so she was sent to her aunts who is an amazing healer and an uncle who is a blacksmiths. She was raised until she was 10 then she was sent to Tir to learn how to survive without anyone to take care of her.
She is quiet and cold unless your her friend. If you are her friend then she talks to you and states her opinion.

What type of character do you play? Any kind really.

What is your Mabinogi schedule? I play often on weekend unless my internet crashes but thats not too often. I play for maybe and hour on weekdays unless im kept at my school.

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Post  Kayeori Sun May 09, 2010 6:42 pm

It's a start there is no doubt about that! But I think before I approve perhaps you could give us a bit more? Maybe a bit more about the character herself. As you stated she is cold towards others unless she knows them. Well why is she like that? Or you can recant an experience the character has had. Perhaps a test of her will to see if she was able to be out on her own at ten. Anything really to give a little more oomph to your application. Aside from these things it is a good start! Just please tell us more! We like stories!
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Post  Zwei Freeheart Mon May 10, 2010 9:34 pm

Don't know if i count but i agree I like to read why she is cold to others is it because of being betrayed like Xeek did <.<

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Post  Temo Mon May 10, 2010 10:45 pm

Personality isn't something major for the biography since it can be learned through roleplay with the character. Bios are for life stories and while short, I think it works. Simple start with lots to build on over time through interaction. I like and give an approval. :3
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Post  Dellinger Mon May 10, 2010 10:54 pm

Basic enough with personality traits.
Background is there.
Approval is given.
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Post  Higura Wed May 12, 2010 12:23 am

The character seems good enough, if not a bit.. Basic, and... I dunno. Feels like something is missing when I read your bio.

I approve though. Your character could always be improved via roleplaying.
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Post  Captincrunch Fri May 21, 2010 9:55 pm

Well, they still need to check in at the Guild Stone
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Post  Xeek Sun May 30, 2010 8:49 am

Any new things?
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Post  Dellinger Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:22 pm

Could someone contact this member and tell them to apply at the guildstone and check the forums?
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Post  Captincrunch Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:47 pm

Nothing at the Guild Stone ... PM sent .. Suspect
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