New Member - Lucaskun

Character Name: Lucaskun

How You Heard About The RP Society: Saw people with the guild tag.

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? A year. >w<

Is English Your First Language? Yesh. ^o^

A Short Biography Of Your Character: Reo Denshin- A 9yr old who plays baseball, he has not realized he possess tremendous powers and strength. He's has a laid-back personality, despite his appearance, he's possess a strong sense of justice and willpower. Reo never had been in the world of Erinn. He had a normal life in his home-world: Earth. One afternoon, Reo picked up a black Wings of Goddess. As Reo ran to show his parents the discovery he had, he activated the wings power. Him, and his parent was sent to the Soul Stream. Reo and his parents lost their memories of Earth. Nao greeted Reo and his parents as she tells them about Erinn. Reo, flushed from their trip to the Soul Stream said, "Miss, how did I got here? Why do I feel... I've been here before?" Nao responded, "You have been sent here by your discovery of Erinn, have no worry's. It's nothing to be afraid about." As Nao extends her hand, inviting Reo to live the Erinn life. Reo accepted and dive in onto the fantasy life.

What type of character do you play? Warrior- Reo mostly focuses on fighting but not yet adopted to Erinn's combat system

What is your Mabinogi schedule? I go to Mabi, frequently after school.

Can you add a bit of back-story to your character, like what happened and how he got here, even if he himself does not remember.

Captincrunch wrote:Can you add a bit of back-story to your character, like what happened and how he got here, even if he himself does not remember.

I haven't thought to much of his back that much, but I'll try! x3

Looks alright. We can work on grammer, sentence structure and whatnot. So your parents are in Mabi as well?

I'll give my approval.

Ahaha, grammars is such a pain to meh.. >w<;

*stamps with cat on lap disease* I approve. Grammar definitely can use some work, but we're nice folks about that.

Sometimes.

Honeko wrote:*stamps with cat on lap disease* I approve. Grammar definitely can use some work, but we're nice folks about that.

Sometimes.

I hope that "sometimes" is a lie.

Take no heed to GTFO part, it's just part of the picture.

Your back story can use some work like what other members have said, your history just doesn't make the cut. I suggest on thinking what actions he took once he got into Erinn, what makes him have that strong sense of justice, and things that he had done in earth as a human. Everyone is bound to grow by their past actions. So, write a little more about him. It's all about steps, organize out your character's history on the paper and list them in order, and trust me if you do it like that you're bound to write more than a paragraph.

Bad Angron!. Seriously, you have to get rid of that (GTFO) thing But it plays well with Angron I must admit Heh. Anyways Much much aproval from Dranis. The character Bio is good but could still be worked on a bit. But You could always just play that out in Rp

Okay, both of you non-officers, "GTFO". XP *kids*

Anyways, Angron does make a good point, but I can disapprove for another reason.

"What type of character do you play?"

I think this was misunderstood. What we were asking was what type of class your character would be in Mabinogi (I.E. Civilian, mage, warrior, etc.)

Other than that, as mentioned before, grammar and character fleshing out needs work, but this does meet the bar. Those little issues are what the mentoring process is there to help with too, so give this one more shot at editing with the advice provided and I think I can give you an official approval, yes? :3

First I have to do this... LMAO@ the last couple posts! Ok! *Gets the serious face* Down to business. Yes there is need for improvement as the above have mentioned. Just little tweaks here and there is all that is really needed. Most of which we can guide you through during the mentoring process. But it doesn't hurt to take a little constructive criticism to see things you might miss. All of that aside.... * drum-roll* The Kaye approves of this Application.

Well, I see three approvals and one tentative approval plus two peanuts in the gallery.

I will update this once the Guild Stone has the application.

The stone is located on the south road out of Tir, just beside the gateway where the white wolves roam in search of a meal.


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OH, and just re-post the updated sections so we can see what was changed an added.

Galin wrote:Looks alright. We can work on grammer, sentence structure and whatnot. So your parents are in Mabi as well?

I'll give my approval.

You mean grammAr*? =D

-Once in a life time chance to correct Galin *_* -

Knarex wrote:

Galin wrote:Looks alright. We can work on grammer, sentence structure and whatnot. So your parents are in Mabi as well?

I'll give my approval.

You mean grammAr*? =D

-Once in a life time chance to correct Galin *_* -

OH SNAP!

I read -everything- I just forget what it is about in the next minute.

*begs for forgiveness from Xeek* Yeah.... This whole resolution thing is getting to my RPing skills.... *mutters about Windows 7 and nVidia issues*

Galin wrote:*begs for forgiveness from Xeek* Yeah.... This whole resolution thing is getting to my RPing skills.... *mutters about Windows 7 and nVidia issues*

Hmmm... Windows 7 doesn't have your video card driver?

Galin wrote:*begs for forgiveness from Xeek* Yeah.... This whole resolution thing is getting to my RPing skills.... *mutters about Windows 7 and nVidia issues*

Seen this issue a few times when doing upgrades to older systems (windows update is not 100%) and its not only limited to nvidia. In case you were not aware you can use vista drivers perfectly fine with windows 7 (thats if nvidia were kind enough to supply them for your card on their website).

Also depending on the driver you can sometimes unzip the .exe file and try to manually force install the .inf file from an older driver into it through device manager manually (be warned this can sometimes bork your bits up).

Generally you have more problems with the chipset driver for the mother board due to windows update's limited repository. Also worth noting is that there is correct install order of drivers after a p.c format which is usually motherboard chipset, sound, graphics card and then anything else. I have learned from passed experience with win xp by accidentally installing something else prior to the mobo chipset and then found one of the other drivers fails to install correctly.

Worst case scenario is you will have to revert back to xp or spend a few extra bucks for a new gfx card.

Anyways good luck and I feel your pain, I hate computer problems and have to deal with them on a daily basis.

Has Lucas been to the guildstone yet?
And just another note;
Drop, have you applied for the guild at all yet?

Lucas hasn't visited Tir as yet. I am not sure what is happening on this one.

Drop has dropped in but I haven't seen anything in the way of applications as yet.
Then again we already have a few associate members who are not in the guild proper either or RP on any regular basis, so that's neither here no there.

lol another member on here asked me the exact same thing on mabi the other day and offered to lend a hand in writing up my bio. I was considering taking up the offer and lodging a formal application but between full time studies, working 2 jobs, social commitments and mabi addiction I wouldn't be able to keep up with things in the rp world or contribute much anyways.

Begin Derail:

Not everyone has to be a primary character.
There is plenty of room for walk on characters who find themselves in an interesting situation and who just as quickly walk back off the stage.
The primary goal of this guild is as a social outlet for those who want to RP with a bit of maturity.

End Derail:

Lucas, where are you?

I'm so, so sorry! I'll send my application now. Again, sorry for the late reply. x3

-Ashley apears with a I WISH I COULD APROVE THIS Sticker- Here Its for the effort.. Plus I don't have the authority to aprove..-sniffle-

Alright I'll send my application, has a mentor selected me yet? Since I have over 3 approvals.