New Member - Razanku

Character Name: Razanku

How You Heard About The RP Society: Ammit

How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? Three years.

Is English Your First Language? Yes.

A Short Biography Of Your Character: EDIT He was summoned into Erinn from his homeland of Kirin when he was 15 and soon found himself slightly misplaced in the world covered with fomors and even more displaced when everyone around him was perfectly okay with slaying them. He had been a bit of a traveler before his time in Erinn and continued to be so for a little while after his arrival, till he found out the relentless behavior of the fomors. He pulled out a large claymore from the pack of goods that were for sale and defended himself as best he could to no avail. He was knocked out and all his things were taken from him. Shortly after awakening from his state he found that he couldn't remember anything aside from the wounds all over his body. He strives to be the most learned knight he can be to try to make up for his lack of memory. He eventually tracked down the fomors that struck him down and got a little primal revenge on them, taking back his prized two-handed sword which he keeps close to him at all times.

What type of character do you play? The Warrior Shrouded By Mystery

What is your Mabinogi schedule? around three hours a day.

Biography needs much more in description before I can approve of this (1-2 paragraphs at least). As it currently stands, it sort of contradicts the question that comes after it too.

Expanding on Gate's comment, yep, you need more meat.
And a 'blur' doesn't always equate to knowledgeable.
When one states something in their past has become a blur (if used correctly),
it means that every memory of said type 'melded' together.
I'd decide one theme.

Kirin is a mythical beast of oriental origin.
It is also part of the name Kirintor from World of Warcraft.
Krynn is the world of the Dragonlance saga.

So please describe what this world was like.
What was the suffering that your character went through?
How did they end up in the soul stream?

Attempting to answer these questions, even if you keep things vague, will get you well on your way to building a solid background for your character.

*notices the edit and points people to the topic
too tired to comment myself atm, and it wouldn't be a fair judge.
I'll get to it after I actually get to college later today*

Ohhhh, this is what you PMed me about! XD

Edit looks much better and everything's good enough for me. May need a bit of mentoring to get some tiny kinks in the details out but that's all part of the process. I give one approval.

Approval given.

Inlcuding Myself that makes three .... Processing Guild Stone now ..... and done ....