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Post  Laoghaire Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:36 pm

Character Name: Laoghaire
How You Heard About The RP Society: my brother Matt was in it u may now him as Acanthus
How Long Have You Been Roleplaying? i think 1-2 and a half years
Is English Your First Language? yes
A Short Biography Of Your Character: he goes head first sometimes without a strategy because of his low level but is loyal to his good friends
What type of character do you play? human
What is your Mabinogi schedule? week ends and when i get home from school

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Post  Dalvar Sat Feb 13, 2010 7:20 pm

This lacks... Everything important.
Please look at other applications and try again.
Thank you.
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Post  Temo Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:42 am

To be more specific:

A Short Biography Of Your Character: Need a brief life-story on the character. Popular mistake, but a personality description is not the same as a biography. Razz

What type of character do you play? Race (yes, have that, good), "occupation", class, etc.

Personally, everything else looks okay to me. There isn't really much of a larger or "unlacking" answer to give for those.
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Post  Remmiel Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:18 pm

Gatemo wrote:To be more specific:

A Short Biography Of Your Character: Need a brief life-story on the character. Popular mistake, but a personality description is not the same as a biography. Razz

What type of character do you play? Race (yes, have that, good), "occupation", class, etc.

Personally, everything else looks okay to me. There isn't really much of a larger or "unlacking" answer to give for those.
It's missing description and background to give us a feel and taste of who your character is as a person. It needs more meat this is a dry and plaid offering that gives us no basis on which to judge.
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Post  Guest Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:28 am

yea, what they said '-'


doods if any of you have time check out infas bio and let me know what you think <3





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Post  Captincrunch Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:49 pm

Says he just joined another Guild but would love to join our RPs in the interim.

Officially an associate member of the Guild.
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