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Post  Raxsus Mon Mar 18, 2013 1:55 am

Name: Seruka (Though Angels don't have physical names, this was given to him, and it stuck.)
Age: Unknown, looks to be eternally 18.
Eyes: Deep Blue
Hair: Bright Blonde
Race Angel, Fallen
Weapons: The Angel's Harp, Ice magics
Physical: Small, "Faded" Yellow wings, Feather on one ear
Clothing: White Robe
Story: Seruka, fallen angel. Found by a farmer 3 years ago, his origins unknown. He was found in a massive crater, surrounded with white feathers, and with a Harp by his side. Turns out, he fell from his own world, and the crash killed him, landing him in Erinn. The farmer thought that this was a formor attack, until he saw Seruka's faded wings. The farmer brough him to a local Church, where he stayed unconcious for 3 days. When he awoke, he was very confused, and went in a blind rage demanding to know where he was. When he calmed down, the Priestess watching over him asked "Do you remember where you came from...or at least a name?" His responce " No...I don't..I don't have a name.." This is when he was given the name Seruka, meaning "Blessed One" in an ancient tounge. Nothing else is known about Seruka, this is thought to be caused from memory loss.
He is incredibly shy, but kind when approached. He is often seen outside Churches, playing his Harp, or contemplating in Karu Forest


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Post  Dalvar Mon Mar 18, 2013 5:21 am

You are aware that Erinn does not actually have angels in it's religions?
(It's fine for you to be one, you just have to have come from elsewhere)
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Post  Raxsus Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:02 pm

Dalvar wrote:You are aware that Erinn does not actually have angels in it's religions?
(It's fine for you to be one, you just have to have come from elsewhere)

Yep, This is also why I put in the memory loss bit. He doesn't remember where he came from.
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Post  Auramune Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:29 pm


The issue that I'm seeing is that your bio makes it seem like he fell to Erinn, not fell to his own world and ended up in erinn. Or, in the process of falling, died and came to erinn. The bio makes it seem like he's not a milletian. Which he has to be xD.
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Post  Raxsus Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:51 pm

Auramune wrote:
The issue that I'm seeing is that your bio makes it seem like he fell to Erinn, not fell to his own world and ended up in erinn. Or, in the process of falling, died and came to erinn. The bio makes it seem like he's not a milletian. Which he has to be xD.

Good point. Fixing~
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Post  Dalvar Mon Mar 18, 2013 3:03 pm

With the change it seems okay to me. Anyone think otherwise?

Does he have any powers you're going to need to request?
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Post  Raxsus Mon Mar 18, 2013 3:34 pm

Dalvar wrote:With the change it seems okay to me. Anyone think otherwise?

Does he have any powers you're going to need to request?

None yet. But the Angel's Harp. Might want something for that.
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Post  Dalvar Mon Mar 18, 2013 3:41 pm

And perhaps the ability to fly?

There's no problem with you getting those, as you have technically completed mentoring, just make sure you go about it the right way.
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Post  Raxsus Mon Mar 18, 2013 3:46 pm

Dalvar wrote:And perhaps the ability to fly?

There's no problem with you getting those, as you have technically completed mentoring, just make sure you go about it the right way.

It's nothing to important towards the character, so i'll think about it more before writing anything on it. Anyway, can't wait to test this character out~ Can't do the flying bit, as the wings are just the yellow sprite xD
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Post  Raxsus Tue Mar 19, 2013 2:06 pm

Raxsus wrote:
Dalvar wrote:And perhaps the ability to fly?

There's no problem with you getting those, as you have technically completed mentoring, just make sure you go about it the right way.

It's nothing to important towards the character, so i'll think about it more before writing anything on it. Anyway, can't wait to test this character out~ Can't do the flying bit, as the wings are just the yellow sprite xD

Alright, on second though, there is a power.
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Post  Soifa Tue Mar 19, 2013 2:28 pm

Feel free to request it in the power area.
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