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Post  Ichigosama Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:26 pm

I really am just rewriting this whole character's bio...The first one sucked so I'm going to compensate...And somebody needs a teacher for their character so I'm making her for that sole purpose.

Name: Alice Jenra
Species: Elf (but used to be human)
Gender: Female
Hair: Honey Blond
Eyes: Deep Red
Hobbies: Reading, fishing, socializing, teaching, play-fighting, spas, frilly things,
((will continue))


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Post  Xenny Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:57 pm

Ichi! D: I missed you!
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Post  Krystal Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:01 am

Is... Is creepy back too?!?! -points at how it's not (GONE) anymore-
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Post  Xenny Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:04 am

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MAYBE?!
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Post  Zwei Freeheart Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:41 pm

*Begain to write futrue child names*

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Post  Xeek Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:46 pm

If she is 13M years old.. she better be smart.
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Post  Krystal Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:31 am

Xeek... wisdom does not come with age... neither do smarts.
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Post  Xeek Fri Aug 13, 2010 8:38 am

Krystal wrote:Xeek... wisdom does not come with age... neither do smarts.

I am sorry, if you are 13M years old, you better know something.
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Post  Krystal Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:12 pm

Well I agree on that, Xeek. I was saying that just cause they are 13M years old doesn't mean they decided to use that time for smarts and education. Who knows... maybe they were asleep for 10M years Neutral

But yeah, she better know SOMETHING. At least as much as any other person would... Most likely more... much more.
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Post  Captincrunch Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:25 pm

Not necessarily if 99.9% of that time is moving between worlds at sub-light speeds.
There is not much to interact with in space.
All you get is really bad TV from planets in their infancy of media broadcasting before they go to cable.
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Post  Krystal Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:12 pm

Or if you did the Orson Scott Card idea, where travel is so fast that a year for the person on the ship is actually tens to hundreds of thousands of years. So essentially you could be millions of years old, chronologically, but only be 20 years old, life-span wise. But who knows... Bad TV, nothing to do but wait... actually I'd go insane or my brain would've rotted away...
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Post  Captincrunch Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:55 pm

Krystal wrote:... Bad TV, nothing to do but wait... actually I'd go insane or my brain would've rotted away...
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Post  Darian Fri Aug 13, 2010 6:10 pm

Krystal wrote:Or if you did the Orson Scott Card idea, where travel is so fast that a year for the person on the ship is actually tens to hundreds of thousands of years. So essentially you could be millions of years old, chronologically, but only be 20 years old, life-span wise. But who knows... Bad TV, nothing to do but wait... actually I'd go insane or my brain would've rotted away...

Not really Card's idea so much as Einstein's. Time really *will* slow down for you the closer you get to lightspeed. Of course, Hawking showed that the closer you got the more you'd be fried from radiation generated by the space-time warp. Now you make me want to go find the calculations for someone aging 20 years but having 13 million years pass on the outside.

My only concern on the app itself is that it's a little, um, empty for 13 million years of life? I'm sure you want to keep much of her experiences a secret but what exactly caused the death of her race if they're so long-lived? Eweca has enough craters on it (from looking at it) to assume that meteors hit it fairly frequently. For me, I'm hitting the logical wall of 'can live for an indefinite amount of time' and 'except for this one thing'. Is there any way to expand on what her people are like that they can live for so long and why this (I assume singular) event was so catastrophic for them?

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Post  Xeek Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:02 pm

Captincrunch wrote:Not necessarily if 99.9% of that time is moving between worlds at sub-light speeds.
There is not much to interact with in space.
All you get is really bad TV from planets in their infancy of media broadcasting before they go to cable.


She is technically Erinn-born. Since she lived on Eweca
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Post  Krystal Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:08 pm

I'm not sure of that, Xeek... unless me reading Eweka is a typo meant to be Eweca, which doesn't seem likely based on the bio. If she had been on Erinn's moon, Eweca, she'd have noticed the planet a long time ago, but it says she didn't when she was star gazing.
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Post  Xeek Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:14 am

Krystal wrote:I'm not sure of that, Xeek... unless me reading Eweka is a typo meant to be Eweca, which doesn't seem likely based on the bio. If she had been on Erinn's moon, Eweca, she'd have noticed the planet a long time ago, but it says she didn't when she was star gazing.


I am sure she meant Eweca, because she even put "(red moon)"
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Post  Ichigosama Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:14 am

Yeahhh I meant to put Eweca, but mabinogi wasn't working for me when I was writing it and I was really lazing and didn't look it up....I'm sorry I'll change that and I'm sorry there are so many plot flaws >< I'll try to work on it~
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